This is art.
I feel like I never really got to hear the song. The notes just kept falling out of my grasp, had this been any longer it would have been a serious blueballs.
For lack of a better word...
It was very repetitive. Although the hook was good, it just needs to progress a bit more. The solo instrument was very tasteful, and it does remind me of Brit Pop. The breakdown at 1:08 is an example - it needs more of those.
You're good at writing, you just need to flesh out your songs a bit more.
~ Catstuffer XXI ~
This song is extremely fun. The orchestral patch is very nice. The blips and bloops seem to fit very well. However, the drum beat is very generic.
lol thanks for the review and input... glad you like it!
Your flow is good, though at times you seemed a bit out of breath. Also, it seems like you stuck a syllable in every now and then for the sake of a word that rhymes easily rather than a creative rhyme that also fits.
Also, the sound quality in general is poor.
thank you its hard to keep your breath when you smoke as much as i do i was drunk when i wrote this and record it not tryn to make a igscuse i also record with a logitec head set missing one head phone no monney for a reall mic or studieo time
Good + Good /=/ Good
The hook was good, and the piano line was good. They just aren't good together.
I love piano in my songs. It's cool tho if u dont like it.
everyone has different tastes on NG.
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